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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-09-28 10:48 AM


Lonely people are all around
Many of them I have found
With no friends to surround
Many don’t even make a sound
They just stand there on the ground
Always waiting to be found
They never even go to town
© By Sue 9/8/01


© Copyright 2001 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2001-09-28 11:51 AM


I like how you did this  
it's true, there are lots of lonely people, that's why you should always smile and say hello  

Topheth
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2 posted 2001-09-28 12:58 PM


Light and lovely!  
cruz
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3 posted 2001-09-30 10:52 PM


your poem consumes an awesome topic which is so attractive!  well done

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4 posted 2001-10-01 08:02 PM


this is a freestyle poem, I like it a lot!
a BIG (((((HUG))))) for all the lonely people out there.

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 10-01-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-10-01 09:03 PM


If only all the lonely would look around, they might see the faces of love waiting for them. And if only all the happy ones would reach out more often....Imagine, as John Lennon so aptly said.
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