Open Poetry #16 |
Lonely People |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Lonely people are all around Many of them I have found With no friends to surround Many don’t even make a sound They just stand there on the ground Always waiting to be found They never even go to town © By Sue 9/8/01 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like how you did this it's true, there are lots of lonely people, that's why you should always smile and say hello |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Light and lovely! |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
your poem consumes an awesome topic which is so attractive! well done |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
this is a freestyle poem, I like it a lot! a BIG (((((HUG))))) for all the lonely people out there. [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 10-01-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
If only all the lonely would look around, they might see the faces of love waiting for them. And if only all the happy ones would reach out more often....Imagine, as John Lennon so aptly said. |
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