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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-09-28 08:14 AM


Who me?  Worry?
This I just can't see!
There is nothing out there
that could ever bother me!

There is not one single thing
that could make me shy away,
and go hiding underground
and make me want to stay!

Nah, I never shake
or tremble with a fear.
I never get a broken heart
or shed a single tear.

This I hope you don't believe,
it's just for Kit and Deer I did write,
to thank them for this smile
and making this day so bright!!


(This was a wonderful way for me to start
my day.  Thank you both so much for
this fun way to break some tension!  Hugs
to you both)


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 09-28-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-09-28 09:14 AM



A fine addition!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-09-28 09:22 AM


Gentle,
Enjoyed the read.

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-09-28 09:26 PM


Ah Gentle Spirit ... it makes my day to know that all this poking fun at our worries has brightened your day. This is so wonderful to hear ... thank you dear heart, for this big smile I'm wearing right now. You've brightened "my" day for sure! Many thanks for this wonderful poem.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2001-09-29 10:53 AM


Sunshine, Thanks!  We needed a day of fun after such tragedy.

Sey, I am glad you enjoyed. It was fun to do.

Kit, You are a doll, and when I started to read the poems I just thought it would be fun to make light of my own situations I have been through in addition to the tragedy that has befallen our country.  Sometimes you just have to have fun.  As I often times say.....Enjoy Life, This is NOT a dress rehearsal.  The thanks are to you for taking the initiative to brighten so many peoples day with your words and to Deer for just making me laugh yesterday morning.  I'm rambling again......lol.....but Thank you is the best way for me to say it so I can finally shut up!!!  Hugs back at ya~~

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

sigheyes
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5 posted 2001-09-29 10:58 AM


*clapping*  This was so much fun and brightened my day.  *s*
Balladeer
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6 posted 2001-09-29 12:23 PM


Of course you have no problems!
I'd never think to hear it!
How could a thing go wrong for you?
You're such a gentle spirit.  

I've seen your words of poetry,
The class and style you show
Could sad strife ever hit your life?
The answer must be NO!!!!

And, if by chance, some jerk comes by
To make you shed a tear
He's gonna have to deal with
A guy named Balladeer!!


You have the kind of attitude
That God must surely bless
So there's no doubt your life is filled
With peace and happiness.

So thank you for this accolade.
I'm glad we brought a smile...
When I can lighten someone's load
My life seems more worthwhile..

Thank you, Gentle one. I am, and there is no doubt Kit is, VERY happy we were able to bring a smile or two to your day..



Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2001-10-01 11:36 AM


Balladeer, I adored this, and I thank you very much for this.  Your kind
words touch me.  I am glad that everyone could have a bit of fun
at such a sad time.  It helps to keep one's spirit on an even
keel.  Thanks again, and hugs to all in poetry land!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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