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Open Poetry #16

Mad

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

0 posted 2001-09-28 01:17 AM

No one knows what its like
What its like to be locked up
Like your some mad dog
Nobody could ever understand
How bad it hurts
To have your sould ripped out and burned
Everybody says "I love you"
But then they go and lock me up again
In that room- That horrible room
White, terrifying walls of pain
No one knows how much I hate them
Just for doing that to me
My life has been shattered
And all I am now is 'mad'
Nothing will be 'alright'
No, its not 'fine'
We're all going to die
But I'll be the first

I cry, but no one hears
Nobody listens to my tears of pain
They just put me back in that room
With the people, who say
'We'll make you better'
But am I? Or am I still 'mad'
Every time, no matter what
They lock me up again, and all I'm known as
Is 'mad'
Nothing will be 'fine'
We're all going to die,
But I'm going to be first

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-28 10:37 AM

wow, this is so sad.....but the images are so vivid, you really paint quite the picture with your words.

good job!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-09-30 03:26 PM

I understand, I've been locked up, i understand and I won't yell at anyone again!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

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