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SmittenKitten
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0 posted 2001-09-28 12:15 PM



it's a fleeting thought
not yet caught
by the web of rationality
daily it
escapes through the cracks
this untenable hope
that you will grab your coat
and show up at my door



Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

© Copyright 2001 Krista C. - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-09-28 12:20 PM


oooooooh, this is goooooooood   I like this a lot  
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2 posted 2001-09-28 05:45 AM


SmittenKitten~

'it's a fleeting thought
not yet caught'


I enjoyed that~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-09-28 08:17 AM


Your succinctity speaks volumes ...
very cool poem Krista ...
so much said with just the right words.
well done poetess Smitten  
jm

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

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4 posted 2001-09-28 08:50 AM


Nicely done. Who knows perhaps your wish will come true some day...


SmartChick
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5 posted 2001-09-28 09:27 AM


I like this. It is really good.
SmittenKitten
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6 posted 2001-09-28 12:26 PM




SEA~
   thank you! *hugs*


Marge~
I'm glad you did    that makes me smile.  *hugs*


JM~
I love your replies   have I mentioned that before?  Thank you poetess Janet *hugs*


Cpat Hair~
somewhere deep inside of me, I must believe that!  Thank you for visiting    By the way, did you know that if you took out the 'p' in your screen name, you would be "Cat Hair"?  Hehe, just a little FYI.


SmartChick~
why thank you   it was nice of you to stop in.

Hugs to all of you!

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Sinister Handed
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7 posted 2001-09-29 12:29 PM


Very nice.
Now... where did I leave my coat?  

Love you!

SmittenKitten
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8 posted 2001-09-29 01:09 AM



awww, sweetie...if only it were that easy!  

love you    

vlraynes
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9 posted 2001-10-04 02:07 AM



Krista-
   Enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

myslinky
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10 posted 2001-10-04 02:16 AM


Couldn't agree more...
   during break, while your driving, or just after reading a poem like this!
Its great

Cpat Hair
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11 posted 2001-10-04 08:31 AM


Smitten... cat hair would probably suit me better... have 5 of the critters and usually can find their hair on me somewhere..( laughing) at least it wasn't cat litter....

SmittenKitten
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12 posted 2001-10-04 10:55 AM



VickyChicky~ awww, you went digging!   Thanks for reading and replying and giving it another go

myslinky~ Yes, a visit from your sweetheart is always a welcome thing!

Cat Hair~ hehe, I know the feeling!  I can't leave the door without getting some animal's furr on me   

Hugs to all of you  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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