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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-09-28 12:03 PM

to try and find the words
to be able to speak through my tears
to tell you of this love I’ve held
all these long years

to tell you that I miss you
to tell you it’s not fair
to explain my heart
and say I will always care

to say how much I need you
to speak of inner pain
to tell you that I only wish
I could see you once again

to make you understand
to just be able to say
dear friend of mine I miss you
……….every single day

~SEA~

pure_innocence
Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 80
Colorado, US

1 posted 2001-09-28 12:12 PM

That is beautiful!!! I'm putting it directly into my library! Such sweet and simple words to express such powerful and complicated emotions, you did it well, I am envious

Wonderful write, I look forward to more.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-09-28 12:27 PM

SEA...this is sadly beautiful. It is a sad time when you can't think of the words to tell someone you care. Well written litle lady
alan

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

3 posted 2001-09-28 12:55 PM

Sea, this reminds me of loved ones too far away. Thanks for saying what I feel.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

4 posted 2001-09-28 01:01 AM

Awww....what a tender write Susan. I'm sending hugs and cheer up thoughts!

Feel better, we're all here for you!
*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 09-28-2001).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-09-28 01:31 AM

SEA~
Understanding where this one came from~
*Hugging you*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sinister Handed
Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 58

6 posted 2001-09-28 01:36 AM

This is a beautiful write and I'm sure many can relate. Thank you for sharing.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2001-09-28 01:38 AM

What a lucky man to have this written to him....by SEA!!!!

Jealousy consumes me!!!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2001-09-28 08:07 AM

to try and find the words
to be able to speak through my tears
to tell you of this love I’ve held
all these long years
=================================

seems to me you just found the words...
and they are beautiful and sincere.
heartfelt and full of longing
well done Sea-girlie

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2001-09-28 08:51 AM

Well done... and I think you have found the words and the way to say those things...just send it to the one you miss....

good stuff SEA

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2001-09-28 09:02 AM

Beautiful words that you DID find Sea. I know this feeling all to well, you wrote my heart with this one girlie!!
Hugs to you.......hugs

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2001-09-28 09:12 AM

Beautiful, SEA. Just beautiful, gal

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2001-09-28 11:04 AM

enjoyed it a lot

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2001-09-28 11:52 AM

Lovely Susan...like the lyrics to a gentle love song...well said. Hugs, Nancy.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

14 posted 2001-09-28 01:44 PM

Ahhh,, SEA, I see I have been away too long, missing your so well written words. You have only gotten better, if that were possible..Very lovely write, gentle one..very gentle smile

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2001-09-28 03:14 PM

I have some friends in California I miss...James

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

16 posted 2001-10-03 04:46 PM

SEA-
   This touched me deeply, my friend.
   I know these feelings well.
   Big hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

17 posted 2001-10-03 08:14 PM

very honest feelings here as though they came right from your heart.

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