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Open Poetry #16

The Last One

boardman
Junior Member

since 2000-05-09

Posts 44

0 posted 2001-09-27 11:51 PM

The Last One

I am the one
The one that's left
The man that nobody knows

A heart of gold
Sit's in my chest
Unused, I hope it still glows

I'm nice they say
To nice you see
The rest of the world can't figure out me

Compasion and kindness
Are two of my traights
But it's the outside that still measures my fate

"Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

1 posted 2001-09-27 11:57 PM

A heart of gold
sits in my chest,
unused, I hope it still glows
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I can truly relate here. I envy the girl who opens that treasure chest.

Lovely piece.

boardman
Junior Member

since 2000-05-09

Posts 44

2 posted 2001-09-28 12:36 PM

Tennessee Angel,

Thank you for the kind words!

I am still wandering the earth
in search of the keeper of the key.
I believe she is still waiting somewhere.
I will prevail and find her someday.

You have a wonderful Friday.
Vince

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-09-28 12:54 PM

this is just so touching, I hope you find her soon

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2001-09-28 10:20 AM

I like this. Very good.

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