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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Fire and thunder Tempest tossed Struggle to regain What is lost. Ashes and embers Screams of pain Darkness descending On innocence slain. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AngelGirl~ This is poignant - powerfully so ... Each day brings us the reminders in the ashes ... Thank you for continuing to remember them~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Thank you, Marge. It seems that everyone has been touched by this horrific even in some form or another. I am still in a state of shock. One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I hope all those who slay innocents and innocence receive a just punishment from God. Keep writing and believing that the good on earth will overcome all the bad. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This poem isn't long but what it says is strong ..it is the same feeling shared by many... alan |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
angel girl- Much said in just a few words. Wonderfully and powerfully penned. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Well said. ~Krissie "No one has ever loved |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Thank you everyone for your comments; they really mean a lot to me. This is a trying time for everyone and I am glad to know my feelings are being heard and supported. Thanks again, Liz One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. |
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