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Phantaza
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0 posted 2001-09-27 06:23 PM


I hate the angels for being jealous of me
For taking you away; why didn't they see?
The dreams that we shared feel crumbled and lost
All that we'd give up no matter the cost
So hard to get up and face everyday
Knowing that you are not doing the same
In dreams you will visit
In my heart you'll live on
But all that still hurts for I know you are gone
Not here to confide in
Not here to give love
It all seems so different for you are so far above
Against all odds we stood together
Although at times it all seemed so rough
It always worked out because you loved me enough
To stand by me always
To hold my hand when I was scared
To face any challenge that I was dared
To some it seems over
In my eyes begun
For in my heart we will never be done


© Copyright 2001 Sarah C - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2001-09-27 08:06 PM


I didn't know Cameron, Sarah - but you certainly have given me a personal look at him... Thanks for sharing this here...
Tracey
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2 posted 2001-09-27 10:27 PM


This is such a touching tribute to your love. Wonderfully written. I'm sure he hears it.
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3 posted 2001-09-27 10:53 PM


Sorry to hear about your loss, Sarah.   Your poem would have made him proud.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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4 posted 2001-09-28 05:57 AM


Phantaza~
This is just awfully sad ... I'm so sorry for your loss~
Welcome to Passions~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-09-28 06:05 AM


Nice...James
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6 posted 2001-09-28 09:51 AM


This is so sad. Sorry to hear about your loss.
vlraynes
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7 posted 2001-10-03 01:48 AM



Phantaza-
   A very emotional and touching write.
   I'm so sorry for your loss.
   You've penned the heartache well.
   Welcome to Passions.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky



  
  

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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8 posted 2001-10-03 02:07 AM


A wonderful tribute. So sorry for your loss. The ending was a beautiful way to wrap this piece up. Welcome to Passions.

~Krissie

"No one has ever loved
~anyone~
the way
~everyone~
wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

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9 posted 2001-10-03 02:34 AM


And each time you look up at the sky
may you see him waving hi,
not goodbye.

I am so sorry.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 10-03-2001).]

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