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In the quietness
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In the quietness |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458
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In the quietness The sounds do come In the quietness I hear them hum. In the quietness My world spins away In the quietness I hear sprits play. In the quietness I find my peace In the quietness I like the least. In the quietness I am afraid In the quietness My love is the most staid. In the quietness Before dark turns to dawn In the quietness I'm rewarded for being strong. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well spoken here, Lorelei. I liked it. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's been too long! Thank you for this, and welcome home! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sure is quiet when you're waiting... and waiting... and waiting... isn't it? I'm glad Mike's home safely - and glad you took a few minutes to write while you were waiting so silently...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A lovely poem of inner peace and serenity found in quiet contemplation. So nice to see your lovely smile and name here Lady L. Say hello to that Pirate for me  take care jm Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
and what a lovely poetess you are! Kathleen |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sometimes being alone, you hear sounds that aren't really there. And when your honey is beside you, there is no sound but his breathing...it's nice to read you again!  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful expression Lorelei ... it's amazing what we hear our minds whisper in these quiet times ... very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Lorelei, Very lovely poem. Nice to meet you too. Warm smiles, ~Marie~ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's easy being strong for someone else....a bit tougher being strong just for yourself. You express it well, poor unfortunate lady married to such a cad....  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lorolei--In the quitness, you CAN here your own strength. So nice to see you, it's been so long! |
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