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Shock |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Shock The news Blasted us against each other As effectively as plastic explosive. Sweat, scent, the wrenched tight look As delicate handkerchiefs Squeezed pale from the grasp Of elderly women. I thought of icing Gasping from the applicator. You, a stranger, unsteady like the rest As the bus waited at the light. Static. Switched. I felt the charged exhilaration That brinks to combat Panic, Fear, The anxious moment Passing, Then shocked again By eyes' want. RMW [This message has been edited by RMW (edited 09-27-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
adrenalin.... still runs rampant.... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes, again you have captured it very well... do enjoy your visions painted here for us to share... good work Bob... as usual |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RMW~ 'unsteady like the rest As the bus waited at the light.' Foot heavy, awaiting the light change~ Poignantly done~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done my friend. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well done, sir. Shock and so many other feelings. Sandra |
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