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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-09-27 07:09 AM

Disquiet the nights, when darkness consumes.
And as light falls, I walk towards the shadows of your hold
within each step, delighting in thoughts of thee.
In white lace flowing, nothing altered, I drift beyond,
suspend within, possessioned by the endless depths of you.
I wander in dreams, beneath a comfort veil
crossing in time, breathing in the silence,
blending the moments, swept by your strength
to a place where fantasy beckons.
You hold in existence, the fragments of time.
For when I dream, it is You I absorb,
You I feed upon, You that shapes my night,
surrendering me to another dimension of the mind
where memory lies and souls are for the taking
and the distance of the night becomes nil.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 09-27-2001).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-09-27 09:50 AM

"and the distance of the night becomes nil.."

This read beautifully aloud...and the fact that I had to whisper it only made it sexier!

There's a lovely little oasis in your mind, you know that? Thanks for sharing it!

Have missed you...but my time has been "hit and miss" again, we'll catch up soon!

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2001-09-27 10:21 AM

Lovely little poem, so beutiful . Like serenity, I agree, your discription of the night is truly amazing . Such a well written, deep, meaningful poem .
Many thanks .
L.of.L. Tom .

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-09-28 09:34 AM

serenity ..Thank you, I always read and reread mine aloud to have some sort of flow..and why the whisper?

I haven't been feeling all that great, stress from every corner of my life, but it comes and goes and I hope is on the way out at this time..have missed you too. Hope all is going well.
hugsssss
~Wynter

angelswing
Deep meaning..yes...thank you Tom, it's nice to see you back *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-10-02 08:13 PM

Maureen-
   This is truly a lovely write.
   Much enjoyed these thoughts.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2001-10-02 09:23 PM

This one has a magical quality to it, and I like this especially:

I wander in dreams, beneath a comfort veil
crossing in time, breathing in the silence,
blending the moments, swept by your strength
to a place where fantasy beckons.

I want to go there!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-10-04 05:38 AM

~Vicky...thank you for the read, I am glad you enjoyed

hugs back
~Wynter
Midnitesun..I would like to go there also..if only I could find my sense of direction *s thank you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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