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Quick Poem |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Excuse the Meter but it is just a Quick Poem *** What we need is a little emotion Mix in a dab of devotion Found somewhere in the psyche ocean A quick poem drowns and dies At the starting line prepared To make the other poems scared No epic ballad will be spared The quick poem wants the prize The speed of sound relates A thought to page escapes And someone quickly rates The worth of its disguise Couldn't help but change it some [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 09-27-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well, I would rate it 'way cool!!'...and fun!
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
It may be a quick poem Walt ... but your message is loud and clear ...  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~  You're just too cool~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
zoom zoom zoom.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
clever and subtle, Waltie!  and I probably write too quickly myself and post too hastily? (posthaste? hmmm...time for more coffee) have missed you Walt the Wit man! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very good for a quick poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wayout, Quick but good, enjoyed |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Heheheh post haste...hehehehe yuh yuh yuh well anyway I used to be guilty of posthhasting as we will now call it and yuh writing quickies o yuh I am just a casual observer not a meanness inflicter (is that a word?) so apologies needed? |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
"Kew1!" |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
I like to stare and stare and stare at poetry until I reach its rock bottom (maybe why i have so few posts). And then I hold my breath and dive into the water that seeps at its rock bottom and swim and swim and swim...So now I've reached the depth of your poetry and think it is MOLTEN! But I only realized it because I dared to drown myself in its beauty. I understand every word in your poem...awesumlee [This message has been edited by cruz (edited 09-27-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Walt- Very clever and VERY cool! Well said! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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