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Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you

0 posted 2001-09-26 09:37 PM


Flame of my heart burn bright this day.
Let my love be the one that lights her way.
May my love speak to her soul lost and alone.
Let my love be the greatest she has ever known.

Flame of my heart burn bright this night.
Let her find shelter beneath my warming light.
May my warmth give comfort to her heart.
Let my voice say that I will never part.

Flame of my heart burn bright in her life.
Let me be the one to dispel all her strife.
Guide her heart to mine when her journey is through.
And let us start over, together in love anew.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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Honeybee
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1 posted 2001-09-26 09:39 PM



A beautiful verse of devotion and compassion.

You must be her guardian "angel" of love    

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-09-26 09:42 PM


Flame of my heart burn bright in her life.
Let me be the one to dispel all her strife.
Guide her heart to mine when her journey is through.
And let us start over, together in love anew.

This is very soft and gentle....left me feeling warm and calm.  Good write.  
~Nancy~


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

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3 posted 2001-09-26 09:57 PM


every single word soft, lovely and sweet  
Tennessee Angel
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4 posted 2001-09-26 11:16 PM


Oh my goodness!  This is positively lovely.  
Moonlight Romeo
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5 posted 2001-09-29 11:20 AM


Thank you ladies.  It's nice of you to read my words.  I do appreciate it.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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