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angel girl
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within a whisper...

0 posted 2001-09-26 07:02 PM


Into chaos I was born
My tears turned to blood from the unseen thorn.

No one heard my silent screams.
I lived in broken, shattered dreams.

No one saw me when I cried
As promises made turned to lies.

No one gave me the help I needed
When to God above I pleaded.

In these shadows I have wept.
Never forgetting these memories I kept.

© Copyright 2001 Liz - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-09-26 08:30 PM


and now??  hopefully your prayers have been answered. . .

well done. . . powerful words. . .

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angel girl
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2 posted 2001-09-26 08:52 PM


Things got a little better, and now they are going downhill again. Thanks for your interest, Sven.
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3 posted 2001-09-27 05:38 PM


Angel,

Hang in there.  There will be a long road ahead of you, but there is bound to be a light at the end of the tunnel.

Take Care,
~Laura~

angel girl
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4 posted 2001-09-27 08:25 PM


Thanks Laura. I am looking for the light, but things just keep getting darker. Not to worry though, I haven't given up on hope quite yet.
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5 posted 2001-09-28 01:12 AM


AngelGirl~
Sometimes the light is difficult to see ...
that's when you've just got to step closer to it, hon~
Follow it ... it gets brighter ... honest~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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SmartChick
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6 posted 2001-09-28 10:17 AM


This is so sad. Memories are hard to get rid of. I know! Because, I am still trying. I hope things get better for you.
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