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0 posted 2001-09-26 06:10 PM


That sad September night I knew
the world had gone insane, for
how else could any humans be capable of
inflicting such heartbreak and pain?

I cried to the willows, to the birch and the spruce.
I even tried crying to a gangly, disinterested moose.

On a chilly morning walk early the next week,
I looked at the snow covered Denali peaks,
and suddenly my heart was warmed.
For I remembered all the love I saw
shining from the departing souls
as they waved goodbye
in the aurora that September night.

And though the grief and the sorrow still make me cry,
the pain is somehow muted
when I focus my heart on the love I felt
in that Aurora of Goodbyes.




© Copyright 2001 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-26 06:30 PM


indeed, many could feel the good-byes of those who departed this plane. . .

well done. . .and wonderfully spoken. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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2 posted 2001-09-26 06:42 PM


Sven, thank you. It is so hard to feel "up" without feeling somehow guilty. Each day I have to find a new way to absorb the events of Sept 11, and move forward, for the sake of my daughter, myself, as well as the future of the rest of the planet. And I wonder if I would be so strong or peaceful if my child or other loved one had been amongst the thousands.
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3 posted 2001-09-28 09:35 PM


It is hard to believe or express. So much was cut short....but your beauty is rightly expressed. We can't let the hate tear from us the beautiful things. That is what they want. Your aurora is very soothing somehow.
Thank you for sharing.

Sincerely,
Regina

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4 posted 2001-09-28 10:03 PM


Thank you, Regina. We had another aurora last night, the first one we've seen since the Sept 11 aurora. It was dancing all over the sky, and this time, I read the message clearly. These souls were all waving and saying 'goodbye, we are ok, we are going to a peaceful place...you must now live for us.'  
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5 posted 2001-09-28 11:42 PM


A gentle reminder that beauty can help us to heal.  I love your interpretation of the aurora as thousands of waving hands.
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6 posted 2001-09-28 11:48 PM


Thank you, Duncan. They were waving at you, too. I waved back at them, and told them how many hearts miss them, and that we will always remember.  
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7 posted 2001-09-29 02:37 AM


Midnitesun ~ I needed to read this, and I thank you more than you will ever realize.  This was needed by many.

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

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8 posted 2001-09-29 02:47 AM


Gosh, now I'm getting misty-eyed. Or is that mysteria-eyed? It is comforting to share these thoughts with such wonderful, passionate friends. Thank you, my special friend.
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9 posted 2001-09-29 04:00 AM


MidniteSun~
And from the land of the midnight sun ...
such captivatingly beautiful thoughts~
Thanks, sweetie ...
~*Marge*~

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10 posted 2001-09-29 04:25 AM


Marge, thank you. I will never again look at the aurora borealis without remembering 9-11, but there will be 6000+ reasons that LOVE is what my eyes will see, and not terror.

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11 posted 2001-09-30 01:51 AM


A most beautiful way of showing and sharing, very well done indeed..Thank you...gentle smile
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12 posted 2001-09-30 02:03 AM


Logan, thank you sir, for the gentle smile you always give so freely.
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