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TeChNo KiTtY
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 22
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2001-09-26 03:46 PM


Wanting to embrace the serenity I long for,
I sit in solitude.
Pondering over thing unexplainable,
And aching with need.
No longer the emptiness feeds...
Instead, merely flowing throughout my body,
Inhabiting the cavernous holes it has left behind,
Previously content with the simple consumption of my internal banquet of feelings.
Delicacies including trust, love, and belonging.
Emptiness has fed on everything but my sad struggle.

"i tried so hard, and got so far..but in the end, it doesn't even matter.."
~Linkin Park

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angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
1 posted 2001-09-27 10:41 AM


Wow, brilliant poem, so deep and meaningful . i can really emphasise with what you talk about . Great poem, well written .
Thanks .
L.of.L. Tom .

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

TeChNo KiTtY
Junior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 22
Wisconsin, USA
2 posted 2001-09-27 02:22 PM


thanks...  

"i tried so hard, and got so far..but in the end, it doesn't even matter.."
~Linkin Park

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
3 posted 2001-09-29 09:20 AM


Yes...it is picky on what it feeds. But we must let hope be the spoiler of its appetite. Excellent write! Enjoyed your honesty in this.

Sincerely,
Regina

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2001-09-30 01:36 PM


Strong words. Take care.
Sandra

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