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A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-09-26 02:32 PM

Knowing Embrace…

After having journeyed through the
agenda of many empty hearts,
you cast a distant aria of longing
which wrapped around me
and delivered me to your door

your heart now safely bound in
the confines of my devotion
I find my soul renewed by
your every touch

and an ever knowing of love
remains without question
the center of our embrace

achildsheart
09-26-01

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

[This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 09-27-2001).]

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-09-26 03:34 PM

What a lovely, tender rendering.

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-26 05:06 PM

Very gentle, very lovely, very well done!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-09-26 06:34 PM

well done. . . the last line is perfect. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

4 posted 2001-09-26 08:44 PM

I want to thank you each for
being so gracious.
I do appreciate the feedback.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

5 posted 2001-09-26 11:21 PM

So soft and sweet... I just looove romance

Wonderfully done!

TaraB

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-09-27 08:55 AM

WhispersCaress~

'an ever knowing of love
remains without question
the center of our embrace'

This is such a delicately tender thought~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

7 posted 2001-09-27 11:14 AM

Marge,
thank you.... ((Marge))

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

8 posted 2001-09-27 05:24 PM

Rose,

oops, sorry, thank you kindly.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-10-02 08:07 PM

Whisper's Caress-
   Such soft and tender thoughts you've penned.
   Enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

10 posted 2001-10-02 10:03 PM

I've taken that journey too, and found the same peace in the same place...wonderfully done Whisper's Caress...you spoke what I could never find words to express...Thank you. *S*

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

11 posted 2001-10-03 01:03 AM

Such a delicately woven poem filled with tenderness...
This is a splendid read 2nite4me PoetFriend and I thank you...

*~coco~*

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

12 posted 2001-10-03 10:35 AM

Vicki, Dulcinea, Coco,

thank you so much for the replies. I do appreciate each one.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

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