Interlude--The Three Priestesses

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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-09-26 02:18 PM

I
Priestess of Dawn
to you I offer
the words of my heart
sung since the
beginning of life

given to my voice
like the lullabies
of your comfort
giving life to all

bless me mother
in your love light
and fill me with
words of love

may my offering
be accepted by
the Goddess of all
the Lady in White
the lover of my heart

thanks be to her
now and forevermore

Namaste

II

Priestess of Sun
to you I offer
the words of my soul
written since the
middle of life

given to my dreams
like the anthems
of your people
giving strength to all

bless me maiden
in your love light
and fill me with
words of compassion

may my offering
be accepted by
the Goddess of all
the Lady in White
the lover of my soul

thanks be to her
now and forevermore

Namaste

III

Priestess of Moon
to you I offer
the words of my mind
known since the
end of life

given to my thoughts
like the dirges
of your loss
giving tears to all

bless me woman
in your love light
and fill me with
words of comfort

may my offering
be accepted by
the Goddess of all
the Lady in White
the lover of my mind

thanks be to her
now and forevermore

Namaste

Art: Priestess by: J Morales

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 09-26-2001).]

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-09-26 02:23 PM

How could one not hear the chanting done
to the powers of the dawn, moon and sun
now a Lady in White, to you shall appear
for you have sung her song, O singer, O seer...

Well done, Sven! This is lovely!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-26 02:26 PM

Ah Sven...Just when I think you may take a breather....YOU up and hand us this masterpiece! I have been rendered speechless once again. Well done!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2001-09-26 02:37 PM

Again, words escape me Sven. Beautiful words.
Peace
~D~

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2001-09-26 02:46 PM

Wow....Sir......
You have sung it so so beautifully.....that the goddesses would surely not deny your prayers....

Wonderful.....my friend

Thank you
****************************

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

5 posted 2001-09-26 03:10 PM

True enough that the most influential goddess would be she of light. I'm getting jealous of all these women you have in your life. Enjoyed

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-09-26 03:29 PM

WOW! This was absolutely stunning Sven.

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

7 posted 2001-09-26 03:33 PM

Beautiful Prayer.... for that is what it seemed to me...

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2001-09-26 03:41 PM

Wowzers! Sven, this is so enchanting and beautiful!

Melissa

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-09-26 06:28 PM

Lady in White, thank you my friend. . .and thank you for reminding me that indeed, Lady in White is one of the many names of the Goddess. . .

Enchantress, thank you. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed. . .

GS, thank you for reading. . . and may peace be yours as well my friend. . .

Enchanted Melody, let us hope so my friend. . .thank you so much. . .

RSW, indeed the Goddesses of light have always spoken to me. . .but, you need not be jealous. . . just listen to them with me. . . thank you Sir. . .

Mysteria, thank you for that WOW!!

Zinsser, my friend, it was indeed a prayer. . .and I hope that it's been heard. . . thank you. . .

Melissa, thank you. . . I'm working on that "Honeybee" poem as we speak my friend. . . it's coming soon!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2001-09-26 07:00 PM

Wonderful, as they all are. This is very nicely done, I like these so much. I must print them all out in a little book.
Sandra

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

11 posted 2001-09-26 08:45 PM

Again a masterpiece, and like I said in dark you should publish a Goddess poetry book Sven.

Beautiful

Still waiting on Isis and Kuan Yin though!!

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

12 posted 2001-09-26 09:15 PM

What a beautiful way to pray. I kneel down beside you and bow my head.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

13 posted 2001-09-26 11:14 PM

This is wonderful, dear Sven! Your Muse takes you on beautiful journeys. It is so good to read your work again.

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