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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-09-26 10:28 AM


He makes me smile like no other man
He brings me to tears, like no one can.

He paints stunning canvases of life
exploring lines between dark and light.

He craves music much more than the norm
So appreciates talented forms.

He makes my knees weak, calling my name
His voice can bring true pleasure or pain.

Yes he loves, in his own unique way
all he cannot do well, is stay...


© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
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On A Journey To The Unknown
1 posted 2001-09-26 10:47 AM


This is good. I like it.
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-09-26 12:52 PM


Say goodbye and w8 for the grownup gentleman that loves you
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3 posted 2001-09-26 01:27 PM


Beautiful and sad, and I admit a fondness for Aquarians myself---and they are generally amiable and intensely loyal beings, but? When they feel that something is done, they WALK--AND? They don't look back. Gotta love em, tho...gotta love this too. Well done Miss Sandra, but don't dwell on 'em...with a lovely spirit as yours, there should be another bus every TWO minutes instead of every FIVE!!!  
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4 posted 2001-09-26 01:35 PM


romantic and uplifting...Sandra, what is YOUR sign  

Kathleen

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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-09-26 02:35 PM


I know lots of women like this...they are free to enjoy the world...and I value the time I share this world with them...James
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6 posted 2001-09-26 04:37 PM


I am an Aquarian woman...so I guess some of these traits could be mine. You expressed them beautifully Sandra!! Keep looking - or just wait - the Aquarian is very loyal so if he's important to you, he'll be back.  
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7 posted 2001-09-26 06:36 PM


I personally have always felt that Virgos are the most in tune with their feelings. . .  

great job Sandra. . .

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Sippin a Timmy's in London
8 posted 2001-09-26 07:11 PM


Enjoyed this Sandra
Can really feel the intensity,
flowing, yet also lingering

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By the sea
9 posted 2001-09-26 07:43 PM


Sandra,

Very nice work.  I am also an Aquarian. (wink)    Nice to see you posting again.

Michael

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10 posted 2001-09-26 08:49 PM


One day may he stay, and stay, and stay!!! Here's fingers crossed for you my friend

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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