Before dawn makes her call

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Open Poetry #16

Before dawn makes her call

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-09-26 07:51 AM

You come to me
like a dream
in dark rooms and flowing curtains
Where the wind tosses my reality
before dawn makes her call
You know who you are
silently
you take me
capturing an undeveloped moment
Embarking
in this adventure
dangerously
Without
any compassion
without any love
Raw passion
invocating
teasing
carelessly
but obstructing
love

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2001-09-26 07:58 AM

woow deep poem, real good read .
Thanks a lot .
L.of.L. Tom .

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-09-26 10:01 AM

How do you do this at such an hour? Great write, walker.

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

3 posted 2001-09-26 12:56 PM

wow!!!!!!! I am most impressed.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-09-26 01:10 PM

Walker, deeply written words with passion. Enjoyed this one much. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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