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Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01
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0 posted 2001-09-25 04:15 PM



The year was 1942
I read the last letter from you
In the sodden trench where I sat
I removed my gloves, I doffed my hat

The crackels and pops I hear every night
no longer hold that evil fright
my link with home, your words so kind
thank god I have not yet gone blind

I miss you dearly, I miss holding your hand
soon my love, its time for no mans land
where the guns are waiting, they will not stop
I have to face this when going over the top

So off I will go my love
onto the battlefield of this war so long
I will prey I live through this human wrong
I'll be with you soon, so sleep well at night
remeber my words, if I fall in flight.

Richy


© Copyright 2001 Richard Pardoe - All Rights Reserved
The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 414
Texas
1 posted 2001-09-25 11:56 PM


That was so many years ago....but so many still remember it like it was yesterday....my father-in -law a normandy vet says you are never as a live as when you are so close to death.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
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2 posted 2001-09-26 08:28 AM


Brilliant, I love the way that you have inclueded the death/life situation in this so well . Thanks .
L.of.L. Tom .

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

illusion
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since 2001-06-19
Posts 296

3 posted 2001-09-26 10:53 AM


I like this a lot - it reminds me of stories my dad tells about writing to my mother.  
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