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RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

0 posted 2001-09-25 04:13 PM


I know that just from time to time
  I write about what's on my mind
And someone special asked me please
  To write about something in legalese.
So to her I dedicate these pleadings
  Staffed and written through many meetings.
You are the victim of my love
  I plead not contest to you my dove
I know the glove of love don't fit
  But just like OJ you must aquit.
Your love for me a weapon strong
  Slicing through whats right and wrong.
Are you culpable, guilty even
  Of loving me, well EVEN STEVEN!
My tort to you my loving defendant
  Is one of knowing what's intended
I hold you in contempt you see
  For running away and fleeing me.
If you hold me there is no jail
  No bond, nor even posted bail.
I am your captive, captured true
  My heart belongs only to you.
So your verdict, lover, please tell the court
  How do you respond to my loving tort?
Yea or Nay, you must respond
  My heart is being held without bond.
Johnnie Cochran could not defend
  You from what my heart intends.
I sentence you, for loving me
  Forever in my heart to be.

Knight of the Rose.

© Copyright 2001 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-09-25 04:21 PM


"If you hold me there is no jail
  No bond, nor even posted bail.
I am your captive, captured true
  My heart belongs only to you."


I love this part  

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-09-25 04:40 PM


If She is out here and sees this...
I hope She yells 'YEA'...You seem so passionate and so much in love!


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-09-25 04:43 PM


Sorry, just me again.  I got so excited I forgot to say how much I enjoyed your poem.  Of course you could tell by the way I rambled on the first time.  
NightShadow
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since 2001-09-04
Posts 127
New Jersey
4 posted 2001-09-25 04:48 PM


*jumps up and down* YEA YEA YEA!!!!!     Awesome poem.. great great.. I dont know what to say but YEA!!!   oops, did I get a lil carried away?

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

RSEvans
Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
5 posted 2001-09-25 04:51 PM


SEA Thanks.  Glad you liked it.

Enchantress:  She did!!!

Okay...now lock me up and throw away the key.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2001-09-25 05:20 PM


RSEvans,
A very nice write. Enjoyed

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