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0 posted 2001-09-25 03:19 PM



‘Tis Time

circles come to wheel me in
setting about a dizzying spin
a child again, my arms wide spread
soon lay ‘pon green’s grassy bed
among the buzzing, bees doffed a dill
and I would soon quash a will
to spring forth again, see summer come
for with sun's light, I'm not done
but circles come to wheel me in
too soon shall I see crystals spin....



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1 posted 2001-09-25 03:22 PM


whew!! now I am dizzy..all that spinning and circles....


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2 posted 2001-09-25 03:36 PM


*smile* I remember spinning in circles until I was so dizzy I couldn't stand up...then just look up at the spinning sky.  Nicely done.

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3 posted 2001-09-25 03:44 PM


Nicely said....yes, the snows will be here soon...whatever snow is  
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4 posted 2001-09-26 01:29 PM


Like Ron said ... except I AM dizzy and he only GOT dizzy - or -- was it the other way around
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5 posted 2001-09-26 01:32 PM


Lady..only to come around again, in spin.  
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