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Open Poetry #16

Tiff

Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

0 posted 2001-09-25 02:54 PM

Sometimes I speak and I just
dont think unaware of your heart
about to sink
Hurt and pain just from me
can't bare the thought of your
love gone to sea

So sorry for what I said,
cant turn the tick of time
but thanks for standing by me,
indeed you are one of a kind

Now the tears have passed,
and the wound has mended fast
I bow my head in shame
put both hands up to the blame

I love you so completely
and I feel pain inside me too
and knowing I have hurt you
I feel the pain in you.

Richy - for Tia. One special woman in this world x

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-09-25 03:01 PM

nicely done... I am sure it is appreciated by that special women..

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

2 posted 2001-09-25 03:53 PM

A lucky lady has brought out the heartfelt feelings in you.
Great poem.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

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