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Love from far away |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
She is so far away Yet when I hear her voice I feel her soft breath on my neck And her tender caress on my cheek Absence makes the heart grow fonder And awakens the senses so much I can smell her scent in my mind And I can feel her whisper RdanJ9/2001 Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. [This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-25-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dan, this is truly beautiful! Oh...*sigh*..how gently and lovingly penned dear knight. Nancy Lee *S* ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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NightShadow Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127New Jersey |
wow.. this is really nice, very sweet  short but sweet! A Life without Love, is no life at all... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
As it should be...well done. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rusty~ *sigh* this is wonderful |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic expression...James |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
short but all too well understood. |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Thanks to all of you for your comments. This is one of those poems that drop in unexpected and sort of writes itself...to the ones of you that write a lot...does this happen more often the more you write? Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dan~ This is just soooooooooo lovely~  Oh, Yes ! 'Drop in' is a good way to describe it ...That's just the way it happens ~ Isn't it WONDERFUL ?  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Rusty Knight- This is really beautiful. Enjoyed it much! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is positively lovely! The brave may die...but the cautious never live... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Such a soft and gentle write. I do so love the Texas gentleman. *s* This is wonderful. *Sighs* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
absolutely stunning.... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I am glad you enjoyed it. I was one of those times when everything fit almost as it was typed...and was made even better by your comments...thank you Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
When one feels this way, one can scribe the perfect poem... 'tis all in the touch. Thanking thee, for a feeling of warmth, Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: |
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bonnie1961 Junior Member
since 2001-09-30
Posts 44ny, usa |
short, but VERY sweet. i really enjoyed it |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love this.. Sandra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quietly gentle. Thank you. |
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