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It Takes Two To make One

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Seymour Tabin
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It Takes Two To Make One

The butterflies that fly the sky
Can only fly the world so high.
But the butterflies of our dreams
Can go beyond the stars it seems.

Itís those of which I speak today
Itís those that flyís our hearts away.
Itís those that play within our scenes
Itís those that fly within our dreams.

There are two worlds that live within
One is true and the other thin.
Like magnets of opposite pole
They make this creature and this soul.

We canít eliminate the one
For if we do than we are done.
We must have sad to make the glad
For how else can we judge of had?

Iíll say to all beware of pride
For tide of time is all, our bride.

© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 09-25-2001 08:02 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~
I love your math ... as I love you~
That's the sum of it !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Your equations equal more
than all the world has set in store
do not divide this wisdom's chime
as bells ring forth the tick of time...

again, you inspire, but then, you always do!
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3 posted 09-25-2001 08:33 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

very nice Seymour.... nice indeed!
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4 posted 09-25-2001 09:17 AM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

Wisdom Seymour ~ written so wonderfully.  Bonnie
Nan
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Where ever would we be
Without the other half of we?

Love it, dear Sy..
SmartChick
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Hey, I like this. It is so good.
NightShadow
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7 posted 09-25-2001 10:07 AM       View Profile for NightShadow   Email NightShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit NightShadow's Home Page   View IP for NightShadow

This is a very wonderful poem.. I love it a lot!  

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

Janet Marie
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But the butterflies of our dreams
Can go beyond the stars it seems.


YES they can  


Itís those of which I speak today
Itís those that flyís our hearts away.
=====================================

There are two worlds that live within
One is true and the other thin.
Like magnets of opposite pole
They make this creature and this soul.

We canít eliminate the one
For if we do than we are done.

We must have sad to make the glad
For how else can we judge of had?

==================================


I've said it before ... I'll say it again(many times)
I do so love the way your poetic mind ponders and wanders(right across my heart)
You do know how cool this poem is right?
But then so is the poet who wrote it.
As always we learn from your wisdom rhymes
and your butterfly visions.
*WW* me





Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 09-25-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
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To all the wonderful poets above my sincerest
thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poetry. With a special thanks to my wonderful Tinkerbell. Who makes the unbelievable look so easy. She is blessed special abilities and sensitivities far beyond her years. Bless you all.
Tracey
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10 posted 09-25-2001 10:35 PM       View Profile for Tracey   Email Tracey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tracey

This is so lovely.

But the butterflies of our dreams
Can go beyond the stars it seems

Dreams are such wonderful things to have. Such a beautiful write

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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11 posted 09-25-2001 10:39 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

We must have sad to make the glad
For how else can we judge of had?

This really spoke to me!  I loved this poem, but more importantly you made a difference today in one person anyway.  Thank you.

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

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Somewhere in time~


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Exquisite, perfect, and oh sooo beautiful!!


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

Martie
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Sy:  You write with wisdom ink, I think.  
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14 posted 11-19-2009 01:59 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

There are two worlds that live within
One is true and the other thin.
Like magnets of opposite pole
They make this creature and this soul.
 
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