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SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2001-09-25 02:17 AM



          

I look into her eyes
   And fall so deep in love
I look into her eyes
   And know she's from above
I listen to her voice
   And feel my soul sigh
I listen to her voice
  And think that I can fly
I fall into her arms
  And feel my heart soar
I fall into her arms
  And always want more
I look into her eyes
  And know I'm not alone
I look into her eyes
  And know that I'm at home

             

I look into his eyes
  And find true love there
I look into his eyes
  And know he'll always care
I listen to his voice
  Singing from his soul
I listen to his voice
  And feel that I am whole
I fall into his arms
  Open wide just for me
I fall into his arms
  And feel true security
I look into his eyes
  So full of love, they shine
I look into his eyes
  And know he'll always be mine

            

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 09-25-2001).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-09-25 02:27 AM


SmittenKitten and Sweetie~
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww !
How endearing~
Spreading smiles all over the forum !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sinister Handed
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since 2001-08-05
Posts 58

2 posted 2001-09-25 02:36 AM


Aww, stop.
You're making me blush.  
The second poem is awesome.  

EDITED: because I just learned there was a blushing smiley.

[This message has been edited by Sinister Handed (edited 09-25-2001).]

SmittenKitten
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Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
3 posted 2001-09-25 02:50 AM



Marge~ hehe, my aww was as big as yours if not bigger when I received the first poem!  And how could I not reply?    Thank you as always for making me smile with your sweet posts.
*hugs*

Sweetie~Hehe, I'll never stop making you blush because I'll never stop loving how cute it is  
I love you  

vlraynes
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4 posted 2001-09-27 02:15 AM



SmittenKitten & Sweetie-
   This is just too, too sweet!
   Makes my heart smile for the two of you.
   Thanks for sharing your happiness with us.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
5 posted 2001-09-27 02:32 AM



VickyChicky~ Thank you for the smiles and sharing in the warm and fuzzy feelings  

Hugs sweet friend,
~Krista  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-09-27 04:30 AM


It takes two...James
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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where insanity meets breeding
7 posted 2001-09-27 07:26 AM


What a lovely duet. Please sing some more!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SmittenKitten
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Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
8 posted 2001-09-27 11:55 AM



James~ You're absolutely right    thanks for stopping by my friend

Tracey~ What a lovely request    thank you!

Hugs to you both!

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