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rosepetals25

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0 posted 2001-09-24 09:15 PM

Autumn’s Entrance

Your warm breath now visible
In small evaporating clouds
The air’s warm tinge is gone
Replaced with the familiar chill.

The seasons exclusive beauty
Yellows, reds, and oranges
Begin a graceful promenade
Across the world’s horizon

Children’s laughter echoes
Joyous play at sunsets light
Delicately blended pastels
Combining in perfect beauty.

Pumpkins eerily coming alive
Mocking grins hiding dancing flames
Keeping watch as the black night
Silently creeps by bringing laced frost

Our world begins preparations
As winter begins to edge closer
Bringing with her a deepening chill
A slumber that settles over the earth

TaraB

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2001-09-24 09:20 PM

RP~

I absolutely LOVE this and I am keeping it!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-24 09:28 PM

BEAUTIFUL...BEAUTIFUL...BEAUTIFUL!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

rosepetals25

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3 posted 2001-09-24 09:29 PM

SEA - You are always so kind

Thank you. Ummm... I guess I should get off my lazy butt and email you sometime shouldn't I?

hehe Thanks again for stopping by.

Enchantress - Awwww

Thank you. I'm glad you liked.

TaraB

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SEA

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with you

4 posted 2001-09-24 09:30 PM

LOL, I'm just as guilty of being lazy, I'll email you asap

Auguste

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By the sea

5 posted 2001-09-24 09:52 PM

Tara,

Your imagery in this is just wonderful.

I very much enjoyed this keeper. Thank you.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

rosepetals25

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6 posted 2001-09-24 10:00 PM

Michael - Thank you dear

You words of praise mean so much to me

TaraB

Marge Tindal

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7 posted 2001-09-25 02:42 AM

RosePetals~
I like your word palette~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Temptress

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8 posted 2001-09-25 04:16 AM

*sigh* How beautiful! I love Autumn more and more these days. I am welcoming it, but here in Mississippi it is just beginning to get cool at night. I can't wait until its permanent.

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

rosepetals25

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9 posted 2001-09-25 07:38 AM

Marge -

Thank you for stopping in. I'm glad you liked.

Temptress - Spring and autumn are my favorite seasons. I looove autumn because of the changing leaves.. It's so beautiful to see

Thanks for stopping in.

TaraB

Sven

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10 posted 2001-09-25 06:28 PM

shhh. . . I can hear her coming. . .

great job Tara. . . I love this one. . .

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Jezziekaka
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11 posted 2001-09-25 08:09 PM

I realy liked this poem. It was amazing!

You seem as excited about Autumn as I am!

Da kaka

be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise!

Honeybee
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12 posted 2001-09-25 08:13 PM

Tara~

An awesome tribute to the many marvels of Autumn~
I love it

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

rosepetals25

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13 posted 2001-09-25 08:21 PM

Jezziekaka - I am happy about Autumn coming. The scenery is beautiful here with the changing leaves

Thank you for reading.

Melissa - Thanks for stopping in

I'm glad you liked it.

TaraB

Midnitesun

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14 posted 2001-09-25 08:31 PM

Oh, this is really nice! It's fall here in Fairbanks, AK. We have been lucky weather-wise, with no sign of snow yet in the Interior. Thanks for the lovely words.

rosepetals25

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15 posted 2001-09-25 09:00 PM

Midnitesun - I'm glad that the weather is staying calm for you. Enjoy it while it lasts

Thanks for stopping in!

TaraB

rosepetals25

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16 posted 2001-09-25 09:04 PM

Sven -

I kinda left ya out there didn't I??? I'm sorry! Thank you for dropping in and I'm glad you liked it

TaraB

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

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17 posted 2001-09-26 12:01 PM

let me think what would be an appropriate response to give here..... other than *bump*..... oh i have it.... but i will post it separately dear

-napalm

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vlraynes
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18 posted 2001-10-01 02:04 AM

rosepetals-
   This is beautiful...much enjoyed.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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