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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-09-24 08:33 PM


Fragile Emotions

Face down, steps unmoved
Frightened to show flowing tears
Emotions to be left behind
Fragility of lost years

Tis the shallow dreams come by
For the sorrow to rest on shoulders
That carry no more of life's wishes
The moment is a lifetime's nightmare

Surrendering, without a fight's glimpse
The figure disappears into the night
One last look upon fields once trodden
Emotions encompassing a fragile heart

The morning sun rising upon frown
A butterfly flies past, a breath of fresh air
A smile raises amidst the tired glare
There is beauty in the daylight's dawn
Until the fragile emotions vanishes
The butterfly will persist for happiness
To submerge the downtrodden

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
songstress51
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since 2001-09-15
Posts 17
Anytown, USA
1 posted 2001-09-24 08:35 PM


a very beautifully written poem.  Thanks for posting it.


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-09-24 08:51 PM


Face down, steps unmoved
Frightened to show flowing tears
Emotions to be left behind
Fragility of lost years

This is very well said.  Enjoyed.  Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-09-25 04:02 AM


JD~

'Emotions to be left behind
Fragility of lost years'


How tenderly delicate your verse~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Domzi
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since 2001-09-08
Posts 288
New York (BK)
4 posted 2001-09-25 03:50 PM


Emotionally beautiful...all I can say.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

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