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Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01
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0 posted 2001-09-24 05:20 PM



Night draws its veil across the autumn skies
a cloak of silent secrets, appears before my eyes
Where once was color, and life so bright
vanishes with the coming of the night

The city, the smoke, the jazz wine bar
young men hoping for action, cruise in their cars
behind drawn curtains, another tale unfolds
secret passions mixed drinks the young being bold

Onwards time travels, the point of no return
remember moraless people, in hell you will burn
Split seconds of mis-judgement
a lifetime of pain
Cross this line baby, you'll never be the same

Hungover and helpless work becomes you
another eight hours, before the dark hue...
Richy

© Copyright 2001 Richard Pardoe - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2001-09-24 09:56 PM


Interesting. Dark, but interesting. Had to read it a couple of times

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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