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Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01
Posts 117


0 posted 2001-09-24 04:06 PM



Another night, another day
another night away
One wish if granted
would be of you
to hold you close
to hold you true

Desire for you is total
you have my heart complete
although I stand up strong
mentally, I am at your feet

Be kind to my nerves darling
they have a bruising I cannot show
and only with pure love and time
you can make them finally glow

So when I am being dumb
and the tears fall from your eyes
remember this my love
without your love, this man
would slowly, painfully die.

Richy

© Copyright 2001 Richard Pardoe - All Rights Reserved
The Rusty Knight
Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414
Texas
1 posted 2001-09-24 07:16 PM


So when I am being dumb
and the tears fall from your eyes
remember this my love
without your love, this man
would slowly, painfully die.


Most men have a problem expressing this....you did it well

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-09-24 07:33 PM


Very sweet and tender...enjoyed!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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