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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-09-24 04:05 PM







Blossoms

You came here in October.
What with winter setting in,
I didn't think that flowering
Would suddenly begin.
But somewhere, deep inside me,
I found there was a place,
That always seemed to hunger
For the sight of your dear face.
It sprouted and it flourished
And it soon became quite clear,
That something new was growing
At the waning of the year.
The blossom, when it opened,
Was so beautiful to see
And then I found another,
When you gave your love to me!


Betty Lou Hebert








[This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 09-25-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-09-24 04:07 PM


Awwww Trillium ~ What a refreshing, lovely write this is.... Bonnie
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2 posted 2001-09-24 05:31 PM


very lovely...enjoyed  

              ~Victoria~

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                                            Pablo Picasso


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3 posted 2001-09-24 08:16 PM


Beautiful, October seems to be my month to try for love, also. Sounds like this was a happy ending  
Sandra

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4 posted 2001-09-24 08:20 PM


Lovely....enjoyed with a smile!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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5 posted 2001-09-24 10:43 PM


BettyLou~
Just so lovely~
I appreciate you sharing such beautiful thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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6 posted 2001-09-24 10:55 PM


Thank you so much everyone for your nice comments. I'm going to start posting some work that doesn't deal with our national tragedy, although I'm still writing about that too.  Gradually easing back into a more normal routine, if I can.

Betty Lou Hebert

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