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Hollowman
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0 posted 2001-09-24 03:46 PM



The time for chivalry is now
I'll save her from the rocks
I'll die defending her name
I'll resist the aftershocks

Of all the men who walked before me
Of all the lies they have sown
I give to you me, a love you have not known

Cant say I wont be home late
Cant say I'll never die
but babe, understand this -
I'll be there when you cry

Nothing more that I can give you
As I have given all I have got
so becareful when you tie
that never ending knot

You'd be stuck with a man who cares
he'll protect you from your foes
just look onto his eyes
and see the light on show

Richy


© Copyright 2001 Richard Pardoe - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-09-24 05:54 PM


Nice thoughts Richy...James
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2 posted 2001-09-24 06:13 PM


HollowMan~
Very sincerely written promises~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-09-24 07:55 PM


Written with a great feeling of love and conviction.  Well done!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Tracey
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4 posted 2001-09-24 10:01 PM


Lovely, lovely, lovely

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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