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A moment.... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A moment it was but in a moment’s reprieve that you glimpsed, and I knew you had been most honorable all along when you silenced me and took my heart |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Enjoyed the brevity of expression, Packing much into little, Well done Gloom |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"moments between moments ... precious moments in time ... it only takes a moment ... to take ones heart in trust ... and become their reason to rhyme." (butterfly wisdom)   Well tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I found a love so strong The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 09-24-2001).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Moments can be an eternity, in the past, the now and the future..A very lovely write, Lady, very nicely said and felt..very gentle smile |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done... concise and strong..while remaining true to the feelings to be expressed... nice work! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
makes me think of those b&w movies where he just kisses her and all is right in the world  ( I know, I'm a sap) I loved this |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Truth in the eyes. Enjoyed |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Loved feeling this moment...last verse, incredible! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Darn, Richard took my statement, so just know I read it ~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly |
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