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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-09-24 07:28 AM

Believed In Promises

It is in times like these
In my thoughts of you
Of your whereabouts
In wishing I knew

Here at every sunrise
I go through the day
In needing to know
If you are okay

Seeking the answers
In the need to obtain
My heart searching
Again and again

The once connected
Is searching the link
I’m feeling broken
The more I sink

If there is a reason
Please let me know
Absence is hurting
I’m sinking low

In being left hoping
With heart yearning
I believed promises
Of you returning

Hope©2001

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

1 posted 2001-09-24 07:40 AM

I like this
its simple
yet complete
it says what you mean to say and I can underdstand it
i share your sense of loss

Arthur

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-09-24 07:42 AM

Hope~

'In being left hoping
With heart yearning
I believed promises
Of you returning'

The 'hoping' fits your name, dear~
Good writing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-09-24 07:46 AM

Sad.....heartbreaking....and preplexed longing....

All expressed beauifully.....

Thank you
************************

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

4 posted 2001-09-24 08:29 AM

This is so sad...heartbreaking...I wish he would get some brains and see what he is doing...
alan

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2001-09-24 08:38 AM

Thanks Arthur for your understanding
your responses is appreciated
Hope

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2001-09-24 08:39 AM

Thanks Marge , yes I shall always remain
"hoping "
Hugs Hope

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2001-09-24 08:43 AM

Enchanted Melody , I thank you for your sweet , caring reply
Hope

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2001-09-24 08:45 AM

Thanks Alan , yes I wish too !!!
Wish he would appear
Hoping he will hear
In seeing my need
Hoping he will read
Hope

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

9 posted 2001-09-24 11:47 AM

I wish I had learned twenty years ago....(all right 30 years ago)...about women what I have learned in pip in a few months.

women on the outside are hard for a man to understand...it's a male thing. But any man could see a womans heart in pip. Thank you for sharing a small part with me..

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

10 posted 2001-09-24 11:54 AM

hey Rusty Knight
your exactly right

On the outside we grin
whilst we ache within

Although I cannot see you
with my words , you can open and view
Hope

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2001-09-24 12:04 PM

Lovely although sad write. Well done Hope !!
(I can't get over how much Rusty is learning about women here at pip.)

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

12 posted 2001-09-24 12:09 PM

Thanks Enchantress for taking the time to read and reply
Yes lets hope Rusty as some good teachers !!

Hope

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