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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-09-24 06:55 AM

White Lies Ahead

Sincerity, I've often thought
in lies the white, that's often caught.
If satisfied in word of truth
no questions asked, need answers sought.
All spoken words endured, lies naught.

Trustworthiness, belief, depend
on confidence, in feelings lend
to place your hope in hands thereof
the certitude in words of friend;
a place in which two minds may blend.

White lies ahead in truth of word
relied upon, yet doubt is heard.
Accept we must that path of trust,
when lined ahead with content blurred.
I write preferred, this day absurd.

"We seek the truth and will endure the consequences"(Charles Seymour)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 09-24-2001).]

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

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Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-09-24 06:58 AM

Very well spoken Maureen, I enjoyed your phrasing in this piece.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2001-09-24 02:40 PM

Interesting piece,
an enjoyable read.
Particularly like the form.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-09-24 04:48 PM

thank you Kit *s

PG..well I was thinking of What Lies Ahead and also of all the little white lies people tell...especially after reading some poems on here about relationships and experiencing some persons in real. So I decided on White Lies Ahead...knowing that truth is hard to come by. Also my form? well I needed 5 lines to complete my thoughts in the first verse so I just had to continue the form....no big deal..but thank you for your comments..you are appreciated.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

4 posted 2001-09-24 05:44 PM

It's difficult enough seeking truth in person, a monumental task on the internet. Enjoyed.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-09-24 07:10 PM

thank you for your response..I use to pride myself on being the most honest person on the internet..and now I am afraid to be that in total any more...but honestly I do appreciate your stopping by and responding

~Smiles
Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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