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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597


0 posted 2001-09-24 03:20 AM


The Rock of You
      
      
      
Think not of dreams
awash in waves
or how it seems
it all in-caves

life is always
the steady chores
o'er many days
and many shores

this day will start
afresh, anew
wherein your heart
lies the rock of you.
          
        
    
            
©   e b-k
09.21.01

© Copyright 2001 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2001-09-24 05:22 AM


on this tiny surface
foundation rebuilt
I ride out the weather
in my patchwork quilt

protection from both
wind and waves
no erosion of me
a peace that saves

upon this rock
I can take a stand
calm haven there
my promised land



Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2001-09-24 10:22 PM


This is simple and straightforward. I really like it...it would make a GREAT card...
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2001-09-28 12:24 PM


this is wonderful    much enjoyed BOTH poems..!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"all you need is someone you can hold..dont be sad, youre not alone..i will be here for you..."  mwsmith

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