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staybellmined
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since 2001-07-29
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insanity, usa (killeen,tx)

0 posted 2001-09-24 12:31 PM


head down to the river
to find the rocks that roll
the ones who free your soul

drink the water that fuels you
the energy that lets you maintain
the desire and lust you sustain

the lights that blur before your eyes
the gentle glowing of blue and green
blows the world away from what you've seen

the gentle swirls of circles and curves
the pulsating beat just takes you away
from dusks last glimpse to the dawn of day

staring at the lights before you
lost in the web they weave
trapped forever, you can't leave

massaged on your temples you close your eyes
and drift away to the racing melody
as the lights become all you care to see

happy and content you sit for hours
with a steady glow from chem lights
and a smile thinking of all the future nights


© Copyright 2001 James - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-09-24 12:37 PM


This reminded me of 'tubing' or floating down a river in Florida several years ago, drinking ice cold Rolling Rock beer out of a leather Bota bag. Very peaceful imagery.  I'm sure this isn't what you intended for me to see, but thanks for the memory of a fun-filled, relaxing journey with friends.
MissNTrope
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2 posted 2001-09-25 09:04 PM


Rollin' on the River - Thinking of those future nights indeed..
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