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AliciaRose
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0 posted 2001-09-23 05:10 PM


"Trash Cans"

A trash can is smelly
and jelly is in it so think about
it before you stink!!!

Trash cans have bags that rot
and get bad stains.
When yo u take the garbage out,
beware, because you'll stink!!!

Everybody takes out the garbage
and everybody gets stains on them
and people think they reek.

But what if you were taking out the garbage
the person who took it out before you
is gonna think you reek!!

So, I taught you a lesson
not to make fun of people.

- by AliciaRose 9/23/2001

© Copyright 2001 AliciaRose - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2001-09-23 05:22 PM


Hi Alicia...

I just took the garbage out - Just before I read your poem about it. Know what? I think I STINK!!!



You wrote a very sweet poem about a very stinky subject here, young lady..!!!



[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-23-2001).]

Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-09-23 05:51 PM


That's quite a poem you wrote there AliciaRose, I liked it very much.

And next time I take my trashcan out I'll be thinking of you

Titia

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walker
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3 posted 2001-09-23 05:58 PM


Great poem, we cannot take out the garbage without getting some stains on us.
Voiceless
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4 posted 2001-09-23 09:31 PM


I agree
the garbage smells and leaves stains.
But hey nothing is perfect.
Great job!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

SmittenKitten
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5 posted 2001-09-23 10:49 PM



AliciaRose~
What do you mean garbage reeks?
I cannot believe my kitty-cat ears!
In those cans are lots of treats
So take back your anti-junk jeers!
~Stickin'Kitten  

P.S.  Was your poem a message to mom about not wanting to take the garbage out?     

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 09-23-2001).]

Duncan
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6 posted 2001-09-23 11:23 PM


Smart girl!  Alot of things stink for alot of different reasons.  Some things were just made to stink.  It's who they are.  And who are we to make fun.  Great poem!
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7 posted 2001-09-23 11:25 PM


Alicia~
It's so good to see you again, sweetie~
Nice job !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2001-09-23 11:38 PM


Sometimes my computer trash can holds stinky stuff too! Thanks for sharing your sweet smelling "stinky" poem. And I hate taking out the trash, but hate to leave it inside where it likes to grow new strange things.
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9 posted 2001-09-24 03:24 AM


Well the apple doesn't fall far from the tree, or garbage can!  This was a very wonderful but "smelly" poem, good for you!

~* A smile is just a frown turned upside down *~

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10 posted 2001-09-24 03:27 AM


What a wonderful poem this is.   You're one talented girl, you know?   You have a very good message here.  

I am many.

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