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Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you

0 posted 2001-09-23 04:43 PM


I know my love, that your heart is filled with pain.
I know that you can't see the sun for all the rain.
I know my love, that my heart can shine for you.
I know that I can be the one who gets you through.

I know my love, that this has been rough on your soul.
I know that you wonder if you'll ever be whole.
I know my love, that I can hold you near.
I know that I can be the one who bans your fear.

I hope my love, that when your heart's rain is done.
I hope that you will join me here beneath the sun.
I hope my love that I can make you mine.
I know that I can give you a love for all time.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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Munda
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1 posted 2001-09-23 05:28 PM


What a lovely poem.   Enjoyed.
SEA
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2 posted 2001-09-23 06:24 PM


tender and so sweet  
I like this  

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-09-23 06:34 PM


Enjoyed...James
Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-09-23 06:40 PM


Moonlight Romeo, you did choose your name well, writing beautiful poems like this one.

Titia

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5 posted 2001-09-23 07:14 PM


Lovely, lovely, lovely. Enjoyed.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Moonlight Romeo
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6 posted 2001-09-24 09:00 PM


Thank you all for reading my work.  It really means a lot to me.  I'm glad that you enjoy it.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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