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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-09-23 07:13 AM



Passions’ Proud Poets


one wrote of how his Lady cried,
one soon wrote her troubled cry
one wrote of her need to return to blue
then one penned of some things to do

soon one found her voice again
then she wrote of where, and when
he wrote, wending his thoughts along
soon he lifted their hearts in song

she wrote of anger, and of tears’ sum,
they held to faith, told fear, “begone!”
one wrote of red, come white, come blue,
all penning hope, as only they do

as dust settled, and all saw more
quietly, silently, they’ll even the score
by lifting hearts, souls, and awesome pride
matched only by an ocean’s tide…

so if a poet, in days to come
hears his pounding heart’s patriotic hum
then casts a memory of Passion’s hue
look around…and see, it’s you…

for all picked up their pen to write
their stance so tall, in their unite



© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 2001-09-23 07:38 AM


So very true Lady Sunshine...never were there a finer group of people and who better to express the feelings of the world than poets.  Excellent writing~
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2 posted 2001-09-23 07:57 AM


As did you poetess K...as did you....
Good Sunday morning Sun...
your glow has been missed.
join me for a cup of hot tea
you know what kind   *S*

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-09-23 08:04 AM


Beautifully composed Karilea ... so many have written and found solace and release. It's been my pleasure and healing to read so many of our friend's hearts here ... you included dear lady.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Rick
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4 posted 2001-09-23 08:09 AM


We as family all unite, with passion words go on and fight
We tell the tales of heart-felt truth, cry tears for the old, the youth
We try with words a void to fill, ponder on ill deed and will
Show compassion, point of view, share our thoughts in what we do

Great write Sunshine, once again you have brought the sunshine to my day.

Hope you are well.

Sincerely
Rick


Nan
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5 posted 2001-09-23 08:25 AM


One Passionate voice sings loud and clear...
Nicely said, dear K...

Alan
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6 posted 2001-09-23 08:37 AM


Nicely done Sunshine..i enoyed the read
alan

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7 posted 2001-09-23 08:44 AM


Wonderful!...As even you have contributed to the fold. Moments of sharing heartbeats, scribed with one pen. I love this Sunshine. Thank you so much.

Sincerely,
Regina

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8 posted 2001-09-23 09:02 AM


ltns...We have so many to be proud of here, yourself included.  Thank you for sharing your heart.
Bill Charles
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9 posted 2001-09-23 09:55 AM


Sunshine - well said, and touching to me...

BC

Munda
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10 posted 2001-09-23 11:36 AM


As always you shine girl.   Great poem!
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11 posted 2001-09-23 11:41 AM


Sunshine,
A good write, enjoyed the read. *L*

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12 posted 2001-09-23 11:49 AM


Hi Sunshine! I just joined. I like your poem.
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13 posted 2001-09-23 11:54 AM


Ah yes. A wonderful poem about the best group of people I know! Thank you.    
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14 posted 2001-09-23 12:35 PM


Beautifully penned Sunshine!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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15 posted 2001-09-23 12:54 PM


smiling at you Kari...and only somewhat silently!   Thank you.  
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16 posted 2001-09-23 01:21 PM


Sunshine,

warm hugs to you
this is wonderful

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17 posted 2001-09-23 01:21 PM


I am honored to be a part of such a special and wonderful group. . .

thank you my friend. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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18 posted 2001-09-23 01:35 PM


There you go again
shining that warm light
all over the
chilly world

I agree 100%
Passions is Home

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19 posted 2001-09-23 01:36 PM


~so if a poet, in days to come
hears his pounding heart’s patriotic hum
then casts a memory of Passion’s hue
look around…and see, it’s you…

for all picked up their pen to write
their stance so tall, in their unite~


...look around...and see..it's you...and especially with you....with your warm sunbeams all over these bleu pages...

(( hugs))
Charisma

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20 posted 2001-09-23 01:46 PM


Karilea~
Lovely, as always, sweet lady~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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21 posted 2001-09-23 03:31 PM


And you also wrote!  I am so proud to be accepted as part of such a talented, friendship circle of poets.  Thank you for this one Sunshine.

~* If you want a rainbow, sometimes you just have to put up with a little rain *~

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22 posted 2001-09-24 01:32 PM


Karilea--The front we hold is more than gold.  Your words are so uplifting, sweet friend...thank you for your shinning!
NightShadow
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23 posted 2001-09-24 01:57 PM


Very sweet and wonderful poem.  You're a wonderful writer, and im glad you wrote a poem such as this! *hug*

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