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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-09-23 04:10 AM

I wished that you wouldn't have been broken yourself,
And then you may not have broken him.
His heart, already less than put together,
Given to you with full trust and faith,
Your promise to hold it well and keep it always,
And then your betrayal of that promise,
Are all things I have to be angry for.
How could you throw away something you're so lucky to have?
Did you not notice my plea for his pain not to come again?
Did you not see that in the process of healing,
You were taking the life out of someone else?
I suppose we all need time to heal and we even have to break a heart or two along the way,
But I can't help but to be angry with you,
Almost despising you for what you have done.
And although I'm told to go softly on you,
I find that I have tried and just cannot do it.
Although he may forgive you, I never will.
And although I tried, I never fully trusted you.

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

1 posted 2001-09-23 08:48 AM

Ouch...I can feel the anger in this
alan

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2001-09-23 10:31 AM

Temptress - I read much anger, but perhaps justified. Well done writing about this subject...

BC

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-09-23 12:29 PM

anger kills.....don't let it

Kathleen

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

4 posted 2001-09-23 01:23 PM

I would say that perhaps, he chose the wrong one to love.

Well written, and powerfully done.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

5 posted 2001-09-23 01:25 PM

Whoever this person is, she isn't worth your energy, Jenn.

Hope you are well!

Cor

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-09-23 03:51 PM

Well...sometimes it does one good to vent anger, and I guess poetry is an excellent way to do it sweet one. I see lack of trust in this one, and I bet many can identify with that loss, and the subsequent anger.

~* If you want a rainbow, sometimes you just have to put up with a little rain *~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-09-23 04:45 PM

great job with this one. . . it's a testament to a powerful friendship. . .

well done. . .

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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

8 posted 2001-09-23 10:57 PM

i feel your anger..have felt it as my own, a long time ago..more than once...

unfortunately..we can tell them, but they will learn only when they experience the pain for themselves..

good for you for offering your little bit of trust in "her" though..thats the difficult part..and its all we can do, is TRY to offer that which is needed..

good venting..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"all you need is someone you can hold..dont be sad, youre not alone..i will be here for you..." mwsmith

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

9 posted 2001-09-23 11:52 PM

First instincts are rarely wrong, but we can't control the hearts of others (sometimes not even our own)

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