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SEA
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0 posted 2001-09-23 01:22 AM


Feelings flow
As I feel Fall
And my heart
Awaits the call
Ever soft
Loving recall
Of those days~
Of those last moments~
In suns fading rays
As we went
our separate ways
vowing till
forever ends
that you and I
would still be friends
I kept my promise
My words were true
I’ve never stopped
Loving you


~SEA~



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1 posted 2001-09-23 01:29 AM


Ah, true blue...as befits the SEA.
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2 posted 2001-09-23 02:50 AM


SEA~
Very sweet ... very you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2001-09-23 06:52 AM



So plaintive, just like the sound of the Sea...

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4 posted 2001-09-23 08:10 AM


Words of hindsight, honesty in review, oh to hear those words "I never stopped loving you..."    Beautiful, SEA.
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5 posted 2001-09-23 08:21 AM


The Title says it all.... i loved this poem..

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6 posted 2001-09-23 08:26 AM


I never doubted it for a minute, SEA

Alan
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7 posted 2001-09-23 08:34 AM


SEA..this is so sweet,is good...
alan

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8 posted 2001-09-23 10:06 AM


SEA - softness sings your heart with a tender pen...

BC

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9 posted 2001-09-23 01:44 PM


this speaks to me today. . .

thank you SEA. . .

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10 posted 2001-09-23 02:04 PM


Susan,

You write of friendship very well, as only a true friend would know how to.  Peace to you this Sunday afternoon and warm (((hugs)))  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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11 posted 2001-09-23 02:08 PM


Love it Sea..well done!

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 09-23-2001).]

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12 posted 2001-09-23 03:41 PM


Lovely write Susan.

~* If you want a rainbow, sometimes you just have to put up with a little rain *~

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13 posted 2001-09-23 11:05 PM


Bittersweet and heartfelt.  Good combination.  Very easy to relate to.
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14 posted 2001-09-23 11:34 PM



SEA~ Oh the feelings this evokes...beautiful, heart-felt write.

Hugs,
~Krista  

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15 posted 2001-09-23 11:44 PM


Midnitesun~ thank you  

Marge~   thanks  

Sunshine~ I just miss my friend   thank you

RSEvans~ thank you so much  

GW_6~ thanks, I'm glad you liked this  

Balladeer~  

Alan~ thank you very much  

BC~ that is sweet, thank you  

Sven~ thank you  

Michael~ and to you   (((hugs)))

Charisma~ thanks sweet friend  

Mysteria~ thank you  

Duncan~ thanks  

Krista~ thank you very much  


~SEA

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16 posted 2001-09-24 12:49 PM



I'm really wordless - very touching.

JamesMichael
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17 posted 2001-09-24 01:13 AM


And the other person?   James
SEA
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18 posted 2001-09-24 08:41 AM


Topheth~ wow, thank you for that  

James~ I don't know, I haven't heard from him in such a long time, but his birthday is soon, and I'm thinking I'll call......

~SEA

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19 posted 2001-09-24 02:30 PM


that you and I
would still be friends
I kept my promise
My words were true
I’ve never stopped
Loving you

I like the "friends" and "loveing you" words here...thought provoking for some reason..

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

SEA
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20 posted 2001-09-24 02:47 PM


he was my best friend for so many years, I will always think of him, I will always miss him, and I will continue to love him, no matter what.  
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