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Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

0 posted 2001-09-22 02:36 PM

Go to sleep dreaming sweet nothings
Wake up with looks of nightmares on my face
But I know you're coming over
Put on my clothes, wishing your hands were covering my skin instead

As you hold me in your arms, I get close enough so that our eyelashes touch
Slow dancing and eventually teasing each other on the couch
The caress of your hands in my hair
And your eyes giving me an enticing stare
Velevet covers and satin sheets
Lace canopy curtains and silk...

As I awake upon your chest, I reminise about last night
As you walk to the door I tell you good-bye
I kiss you farewell but my mind is telling you to keep you here
I shut the door and return to my pool of desire
The scent of cologne and perfume smoother the satin
I lay back, breathe in, and get high from the smells of love

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-09-22 03:19 PM

Put on my clothes, wishing your hands were covering my skin instead

As you hold me in your arms, I get close enough so that our eyelashes touch
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These are such soft and senually lovely thoughts...
you have captured the passion and desire of such an interlude..chemistry between two and the essence and afterglow.
loved the lines about the scents left behind,
very well done
jm

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

Marge Tindal