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RSEvans
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0 posted 2001-09-22 02:27 PM


Floating on a lonely breeze
  Carried high above the trees
Flying softly through the air
  Destined to fall but without care.
You carry my heart within your folds
  Daring to love a love so bold
And lift my cares like a gentle wind
  So that I may fly again.
Thank you, my love for lifting me
  High enough for all to see.
Thank you for sharing your love so true
  Pushing away the memories blue.
Thank you for saving me from my fall
  So that I can give you my all.
Thank you for loving me more than enough
  When the going got rigid and tough.
Thank you for holding me in your heart
  When we were seemingly eternally apart.
But most of all thank you for being you
  And being my love, forever true.

Knight of the Rose.

© Copyright 2001 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-09-22 07:29 PM


RSEvans~

'Thank you, my love for lifting me
High enough for all to see.'


This is just so refreshing~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SmittenKitten
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2 posted 2001-09-22 07:31 PM



RSEvans~ Awww!   This makes my soul smile.  Thank *you*

Hugs,
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-09-22 07:44 PM


Ahhh, this makes my heart feel like it might just explode!  What wonderful things to say about someone special.  Well done!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

RSEvans
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4 posted 2001-09-22 07:48 PM


Marge - Thanks

Kitten - You're sweet

Enchantress - Please, no exploding hearts...very very messy...but thanks for the compliment.

SEA
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with you
5 posted 2001-09-22 07:53 PM


this is just the sweetest! My goodness   I really like this  
Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2001-09-22 08:01 PM


Must be true love

Beautiful verse

Titia

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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
7 posted 2001-09-22 08:18 PM


One can't help but smile when reading this, well done!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


Elizabeth
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8 posted 2001-09-22 10:14 PM


How very sweet!

God bless America, my home sweet home.

NightShadow
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9 posted 2001-09-24 09:40 AM


This is one of the sweetest things I have ever read..   You're so wonderful and you havent lost your way with words.. I love this poem!  

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2001-09-24 03:44 PM


Sounds like a love connection...James
catalinamoon
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11 posted 2001-09-24 07:10 PM


This is nice, feels like the way I want my life to turn out. Thanks for the lovely poem in reply also.  
Sandra

nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2001-09-24 07:20 PM


your message was  so soft and gentle...

very nice..

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



vlraynes
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13 posted 2001-09-27 01:43 AM



RSEvans-
   Such beautiful sentiments of love.
   Makes my heart smile for you.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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