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NightShadow
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0 posted 2001-09-22 01:14 PM


A man stands alone
wondering where he went wrong
why he hurts
why anyone cares

The Man, wanders
finding whatever he can to boost him up
wondering why he is stuck here
why is he being tortured

The man, still wanders
hating himself
hating his mistakes
wondering why he did them in the first place

The man, stumbles upon a woman
a beautiful creature
one, that loves him
cares for him but he doesn’t know why

The woman, continually loves
the man, doesn’t know what to do
he just sits there.. and takes it
but he is still blue

The man, wanders
hurting for that wasn’t the woman he loved
The wrong woman came into his life
broke his heart, and made him hate himself

The man, ever so wanders
his feet getting sore
his arms feeling like nothing
his heart, about to give up

The man, stumbles upon a woman
a wondrous creature in all her beauty
the man, finally smiles
happy knowing she didn’t leave him

The woman, seems to be in a shell
but she too, is happy
for loving this man is the only thing she could do
For she loved him, forever.

The man, takes the woman
the wander together forever
happy in the bliss of love
true love
__________
Dedicated to my husband..

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

© Copyright 2001 Sarah Jeffers - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-09-22 02:14 PM


NightShadow~
What a lovely piece written with love for your husband~
~*Marge*~

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RSEvans
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2 posted 2001-09-22 02:16 PM


What a lovely tribute..well written..
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3 posted 2001-09-23 01:50 AM


how very sweet   I liked the way this plays out   nicely done  
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