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Alan
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right next door

0 posted 2001-09-22 12:51 PM



Your face
Your eyes
Your nose
Your smile
All perfectly placed

Makes me wish
That I could hold
Such a dish

Skin so soft
Angels cry
From aloft
Hard as they try
They’ll never compare to you

For in my eyes
You are a rose
You are perfect
From your head to your toes

alan

© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-09-22 12:54 PM


*swoon*
I feel faint........

Alan, this is wonderful!!  

Alan
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2 posted 2001-09-22 12:57 PM


thanks Sea..if you faint..pick a soft spot to land.last time i checked the floor was hard...
alan

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3 posted 2001-09-22 01:01 AM


LOL
ok, I'll be careful  

Alan
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4 posted 2001-09-22 01:05 AM


smart lady  
HopeS
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5 posted 2001-09-22 05:24 AM


Wow Alan , so perfect she must be one great lady
Hope

Alan
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6 posted 2001-09-22 06:38 AM


She is Hope. Thanks for the reply sweet lady
alan

Kethry
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7 posted 2001-09-22 07:14 AM


Alan,
this is lovely as well as being succint, I'm sure it would cause a fair maiden to swoon.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Alan
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8 posted 2001-09-22 07:20 AM


Kethry...I wrote this on te spur of the moment.it was written about no one in particular...although it would fit all the ladies here...I wrote it..trying to change my mood....thanks for your kind words
alan

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9 posted 2001-09-22 12:22 PM


wanted this in my library  
Kit McCallum
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10 posted 2001-09-22 12:50 PM


This is so sweet Alan ... very nicely expressed.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

NightShadow
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11 posted 2001-09-22 12:52 PM


very sweet! nicely done..

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

Enchantress
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12 posted 2001-09-22 02:39 PM


*swoon*  Very well done Alan!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Tracey
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13 posted 2001-09-23 12:57 PM


This is so sweet and pretty. It should be in a card.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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14 posted 2001-09-23 01:10 AM


Your words
Your heart
Your mind
So smart!
I never knew
I liked mush
this much!

Thanks for the sweetly scented breath of fresh air.

catalinamoon
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15 posted 2001-09-23 10:20 AM


Lovely, Alan, a nice treat.
Sandra

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