»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #16
»
Rolex Memories In Bulova Time
| Open Poetry #16 |
|
Rolex Memories In Bulova Time |
|
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
|
Rolex Memories In Bulova Time ~*Marge Tindal*~ Rolex memories tick in Bulova time Crystal stemware holds cheap wine All the dreams of yesterday's lies Holds court in remembered disguise Lap of luxury now holds no pleasure As thoughts of the past I measure Ticking of the tocking again to beat Rolex moments not given into defeat Wanting full-stemmed glass to hold Dreams I thought lined purest gold ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved | |||
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh Marge, this is just so touching  I love this |
||
|
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautiful Marge, you just keep those words of wonder coming! Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
||
|
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl dearest sister of my heart, as always your words are truly beautiful. I don't know how you do it darling girl but you always do. Just utterly wonderful writing  love ad warm stuff always Mushy   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
||
|
Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
I loved the use of words in this poem. As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
||
|
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is (SIGH) just beautiful (SIGH) TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
As always Marge...BEAUTIFULLY DONE!! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thanks, gal~ Kethry~ Good to see you. Thank you~ MarshaLove~ Always good to see you drop in, my friend. Thank you muchly~ Domzi~ I appreciate that. Thank you~ Titia~ Awwww ! *Hugs* n' thanks, my friend~ Enchantress~ Thank you very much. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Yet another beautifully touching write from your pen. I love this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
||
|
Twilight Myst Member
since 2001-10-04
Posts 58Just A Myst At Twilight |
Ohh, this is just so heart touching, Marge!! |
||
|
Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, sigh, Marge, at times I wonder why I even post, when I see the wonders you turn out..very good, little Goose..very gentle smile |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I don't think I ever had those Rolex memories..am still trying to think back *s hugss ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Marge may all your Rolex dreams come true...James |
||
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's all relative, isn't it?... and in the large scheme of things, what does it really matter? All we can give is our best, and make the best of what we're given...Nicely said, m'friend.. |
||
|
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I love your creativity Marge ... wonderful comparisons, much enjoyed my friend! Best wishes, /Kit |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Thank you, sweetest friend. I'm always glad to know you enjoy something from my pen~  TwilightMyst~ Thank you so much. Logan~ You post cause you know I'd have a polite cow if you didn't~  Love ya' Wynter~ Sure ya' did~ You just need to rewind 'em~  JamesMichael~ Thank you for those wishes, my friend. Nan~ Yeppers ! And that little Bulova analog just keeps on ticking~ Kit~ Thanks, gal~ I just find these weird ideas splashing around in my inkwell~ Go figure~ *Thanks all~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good. You sure have a way with words. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
