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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-09-21 07:03 PM



In Angel's Keep ...

~*Marge Tindal*~

Mighty wings of angelic love
hover 'round fallen sisters and brothers
Angels keeping another angel company
guarding them with wings aflutter

Crumbled buildings smoking yet
Amid the rubble, 'neath the heap
God, please bless souls of them all
hold them in an angel's keep

Tender tears in angel keeping
fall while all the world stands weeping


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-09-21 07:06 PM


May god take all of those souls into his arms and love them...for they are his...James
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-09-21 07:19 PM


"Tender tears in angel keeping
fall while all the world stands weeping"

Beautiful phrasing Marge. Hugs to you.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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3 posted 2001-09-21 07:24 PM


Beautifully and gently told Marge.  Just lovely.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-09-21 07:42 PM


Marge,
Tender tears in angel keeping
fall while all the world stands weeping
That sais it all. *L*

Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2001-09-21 08:12 PM


Just beautiful Marge

My heart weeps too
for you in pain
so many lifes
lost in vain

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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6 posted 2001-09-21 08:19 PM



There is one angel for sure watching over them....you, Marge  


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7 posted 2001-09-21 09:05 PM


Beautiful Margie....and ditto Dear Deer...
we all find comfort in you keeping watch.
heart hugs to you sweet poetess
jm

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

Soaringeagle
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8 posted 2001-09-21 10:01 PM


BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN MARGE
THANKS FOR SHARING
ANOTHER MASTERPIECE

we will remember them<>

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9 posted 2001-09-21 10:30 PM


I read this with tears in my eyes, but hope in my heart....


Greeneyes~


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 09-21-2001).]

devina
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10 posted 2001-09-21 10:48 PM


Your beautiful heart shows through this poem Marge...I've missed your sweet words!!! Love to you mum...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Alan
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11 posted 2001-09-21 10:50 PM


wonderfully expressed. beautiful message
alan

Elizabeth
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12 posted 2001-09-21 11:36 PM


I'm sure He will, Marge....

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Lone Wolf
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13 posted 2001-09-22 12:05 PM


Lovely work, Marge.  May the angels hold them close and keep them safe for eternity.  

LW

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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14 posted 2001-09-22 12:33 PM


Marge:  Such a tender, lovely poem. It was comforting to read. Thanks.

Betty Lou Hebert

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15 posted 2001-09-22 01:00 AM


Margie girl, yes I popped in and yes I read your beautiful work, as always darling sister of my heart it is outstanding.

Yes they all are resting with the angels and you are my angel here on earth.
                            

Take care
love and warm stuff as always
Mushy
    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2001-09-23 12:49 PM


JamesMichael~
I pray so too.  Thank you.

Kit~
Thank you, hon~
I needed that hug~

Enchantress~
Thank you.

Seymour~
I appreciate you.

Titia~
I know, love ... I know and appreciate it~

Balladeer~
Thank you, sweetie~

JanetMarie~
Thanks for the hugs~

SoaringEagle~
I love you~

GreenEyes~
Me too, hon.  Thanks~

Devina~
So good to see you sweetie~
Love right back at ya'

Alan~
Thank you so much.

Elizabeth~
*smiles*

LoneWolf~
Yes, that is my prayer also.  Thank you~

BettyLou~
Thank you dearest lady~

Marsha~
Thanks so much for fluttering by, dear heart~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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17 posted 2001-09-24 04:53 AM


I was gone a few days and had to go back several pages to go through to find wherehI left off. I am glad I didn't miss this one.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2001-09-24 05:28 AM


Dan~
Thank you very much~
I'm pleased that you didn't miss it also.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Dee
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19 posted 2001-09-24 06:14 AM


Marge, your angel poems are always an inspiration here. Beautiful work as usual.


Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

[This message has been edited by Dee (edited 09-24-2001).]

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20 posted 2001-09-24 06:44 AM


Whew! I felt tears on their way out.
I have hope for those people under the
rubble...thanks for this fantastic
poem.

Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2001-09-24 06:52 AM


Dee~
I appreciate that, hon.

Domzi~
Oh, I'm trying so hard to hold on to the hope ...
but, my spirits are lagging~
Thank you for your kind thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

vlraynes
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22 posted 2001-09-27 12:24 PM



Marge-
   This touched deeply...

      "Tender tears in angel keeping
   fall while all the world stands weeping"


   Though the time continues to pass,
   we will NOT give up hope.
   Love you, sweetest friend.
   HUGS,
   ~Vicky


  

  

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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23 posted 2001-09-27 12:49 PM



Awww Marge...you are our Passions angel  
This is such a beautiful poem...it reaches out to so many and in such a time of need.  Thank you Marge.
Hugs and love,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Marge Tindal
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24 posted 2001-09-27 05:44 AM


Vicky~
Sweetest angel of my heart ...
We hold hands in hope.

SmittenKitten~
I flutter only on the wings of love...
Thank you so much.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Marge Tindal
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25 posted 2002-09-10 09:32 PM


Time, again, to reverently remember~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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