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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-09-21 06:21 PM



Non-Evanescent Rhyme
~*Marge Tindal*~

Words of polish
quite the rage
Etched upon
Passions page
Poets we are
fame will proclaim
Written proudly
in our name
Blot of ink
on blue of screen
Do you know
just what it means ?
Someday - somewhere
down the line
we will not be known for
evanescent rhyme



I love it when I have to scurry
to find a word in my dictionurry
I'll take it easy on you here
the meaning of this word so clear

ev·a·nes·cent
adj.
Vanishing or likely to vanish like vapor



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-09-21 06:38 PM


Those are true words (and thank you for explaining non-evanescent, for I never would have guessed what it meant, being a Dutchie  

I've been a bit busy, must set myself to rhyming again  

Thanks sweet Marge

Titia

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2 posted 2001-09-21 07:37 PM


Marge,
I hope so sweet poet. *L*

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3 posted 2001-09-23 12:54 PM


Titia~
I enjoy having you here, sweet lady.
Thank you so much~

Seymour~
I'm sure of it, my friend~
Love ya'
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

vlraynes
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4 posted 2001-09-23 05:36 PM



Marge-
   And you wonder why I treat you like
   you're a teacher...you ARE a teacher! LOL!
   I love this poetic vocabulary lesson!
   Awesome, my friend!
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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5 posted 2001-09-23 09:26 PM


This is great!
I love the flow and
the new word!
I agree very much with
this, excellent!

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rascalx
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6 posted 2001-09-23 09:36 PM


a thoughtful poem and a vocabulary lesson all rolled up into one   I like this, especially the last verse. Very well done!  
                  - Jeff

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7 posted 2001-09-23 09:53 PM


This is lovely. And thank you so much for adding the meaning, since I have mis-placed my dictionary and would have been left wondering  

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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8 posted 2001-09-23 09:54 PM


ev·a·nes·cent
adj.
Vanishing or likely to vanish like vapor


I was trying to think of ways to use this word tomorrow after I did one of my "thoughtful pouts" I learned about from SEA.
I have to go now and look for a report I saved in an evanescent file.


Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

[This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-24-2001).]

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9 posted 2001-09-23 10:00 PM



Marge~ hehe, I was *just* reaching for the dictionary as I read that last little bit    thank you for saving me the effort!  And thanks for the new word    This was a lovely poem Marge  

Hugs and such,
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

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10 posted 2001-09-24 12:13 PM


Vicky~
Tee-Hee @'teacher' ...
Now ... the erasers need cleaning !

VoiceLess~
Glad you enjoyed it~

Rascalx~
Thankee so much~

Tracey~
LOL !  I'm glad I added it too !

Dan~
LOL !

SmittenKitten~
Thanks, gal !

*NOTE -
Online dictionary -
http://www.dictionary.com

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Rex Allen McCoy
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11 posted 2001-09-24 12:35 PM


I do believe you're correct
It's that magic pen!

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12 posted 2001-09-24 12:54 PM


Gosh, and all this time
I thought I was posting
effervescence!
HeHe...thanks for sending me some
bubbly, vaporous fun, Marge.

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13 posted 2001-09-24 05:34 AM


Rex~
Thanks ... actually it's inspiration from
my 'Word Of The Day' from the Dictionary.com site~
But ... magic works for me !

MidniteSun~
You can bubble ... but do NOT disappear in a vapor~
Thanks, gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Nan
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14 posted 2001-09-24 10:02 AM


Hehe... Such a thought would be imperceptible...
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15 posted 2001-09-24 12:19 PM



Not when our Archives are chock full....[Ron, do check your backup system, yes?]

Well done, our Marge!

Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2001-09-25 03:48 AM


Nan~
That's the truth !  

LadyInWhite~
Five'll get ya' ten ... he's got it covered !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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